The farewell song
Si belle, j'etais tres emu. I was so very moved by this. Can I include it in tmw's post?
I’ m gong to correct the rhyme and of course you can. But I don’t think it’s good enough! Thanks.
Np
Done! I think that now the rhyme is better, but I will give it some more reviews before including it in a chapter.
K
Sería un gran comienzo para un hermoso poema.
I image it would sound better in Spanish.
In Spanish you can read it here: https://lasmilyunanarraciones.com/2024/12/17/la-cancion-de-la-despedida/
"I image it would sound better in Spanish": I hope, but you can read it... That's why I don't like to write poetry... 🤣🤣🤣
"Sería un gran comienzo para un hermoso poema." That's the intention...
Si belle, j'etais tres emu. I was so very moved by this. Can I include it in tmw's post?
I’ m gong to correct the rhyme and of course you can. But I don’t think it’s good enough! Thanks.
Np
Done! I think that now the rhyme is better, but I will give it some more reviews before including it in a chapter.
K
Sería un gran comienzo para un hermoso poema.
I image it would sound better in Spanish.
In Spanish you can read it here: https://lasmilyunanarraciones.com/2024/12/17/la-cancion-de-la-despedida/
"I image it would sound better in Spanish": I hope, but you can read it... That's why I don't like to write poetry... 🤣🤣🤣
"Sería un gran comienzo para un hermoso poema." That's the intention...